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avatar I just had to write this.
June 01, 2010 07:13PM
Problems?

I say in class that I don’t trust people and they wonder why.

But I know why.

You’re always yelling at me, saying I don’t do things.

Its true, I don’t do much.

Why should I though?

I don’t get anything in return.

Oh sure, I get food, clothes when I bitch that I don’t have any for days, weeks on end and a place to sleep.

But the law says you have to give me those things.

How about a little incentive for doing things?

Maybe an allowance?

A decent vehicle to drive if I get my license?

A “job well done“?

I love you?

A hug of all things?

You ask what’s wrong with me.

I don’t trust you enough to tell you.

You have no more ethos with me.

Go tell your lies somewhere else.

Leave me alone, I’ll get things done.

I always do.

You seriously need to learn how to give some affection.

I could get a better hug from fencepost when I do get one from you.

Your “I love you”s have no feeling behind them.

How can I trust you when there’s virtually no affection?

At school, some of my friends run to me and give me hugs when they see me.

Some of them.

Their hugs feel good.

Yours don’t.

I can feel a difference believe it or not.

You say you like spending time with me.

Only when its convient for you I guess?

There are times I wish you were someone else.

Someone I might actually trust to tell things too.

You say to straighten up and do better in school.

I ask you for help in math, and you don’t even attempt to help me..

So here’s what I propose!

I start doing what I have to do in everything if you do what you need to do to straighten up too.

Meet me halfway.

If you don’t.

Its sad to say.

Things will fall apart.

I don’t want that.

I still love you.

I would fight for you.

I’ll fix my problems.

If you fix your problem.



Its just something I did in a few minutes. I ran it through spell check but I don't think I got everything right. Oh well.



<3 Zack <3

"Pain is Temporary - Pride is forever"
Lax forever
There are two times of the year that stir the blood.
In the fall, for the hunt,
and now for lacrosse.



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/01/2010 07:14PM by Jess.
avatar Re: I just had to write this.
June 01, 2010 11:39PM
i really like it. great jobright on!
avatar Re: I just had to write this.
June 02, 2010 01:41AM
nicely said jessapplausehugheart



It's not supposed to go like that, its not intended to end that way, life is a journey, constantly turnin' down an unknown path, but its not supposed to go like that
avatar Re: I just had to write this.
June 03, 2010 07:16AM
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Jess
Its just something I did in a few minutes. I ran it through spell check but I don't think I got everything right. Oh well.

It's really good.



~ There is a "lie" in believe, "over" in lover, "end" in friend, and an "if" in life.
And after Monday and Tuesday even the calendar says W.T.F. ~
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June 05, 2010 08:01PM
Thanks.



<3 Zack <3

"Pain is Temporary - Pride is forever"
Lax forever
There are two times of the year that stir the blood.
In the fall, for the hunt,
and now for lacrosse.
avatar Re: I just had to write this.
October 06, 2010 07:10PM
wow...loved it. A little late in reading it, sorry, but Jess it's really good. It makes you think about a lot. Well donesmiling smiley



Never mind, I'll find someone like you
I wish nothing but the best for you
Don't forget me, I beg
I remember you said,
"Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead."
avatar Re: I just had to write this.
October 07, 2010 02:25PM
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Ursula
wow...loved it. A little late in reading it, sorry, but Jess it's really good. It makes you think about a lot. Well donesmiling smiley

Thanks



<3 Zack <3

"Pain is Temporary - Pride is forever"
Lax forever
There are two times of the year that stir the blood.
In the fall, for the hunt,
and now for lacrosse.
avatar Re: I just had to write this.
October 08, 2010 08:38AM
That's very nice. I hope you don't mind me asking: Is the poem about someone real?




avatar Re: I just had to write this.
October 08, 2010 03:11PM
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Husitka
That's very nice. I hope you don't mind me asking: Is the poem about someone real?

Thanks.
Sure is.



<3 Zack <3

"Pain is Temporary - Pride is forever"
Lax forever
There are two times of the year that stir the blood.
In the fall, for the hunt,
and now for lacrosse.

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