Problems?

I say in class that I don’t trust people and they wonder why.

But I know why.

You’re always yelling at me, saying I don’t do things.

Its true, I don’t do much.

Why should I though?

I don’t get anything in return.

Oh sure, I get food, clothes when I bitch that I don’t have any for days, weeks on end and a place to sleep.

But the law says you have to give me those things.

How about a little incentive for doing things?

Maybe an allowance?

A decent vehicle to drive if I get my license?

A “job well done“?

I love you?

A hug of all things?

You ask what’s wrong with me.

I don’t trust you enough to tell you.

You have no more ethos with me.

Go tell your lies somewhere else.

Leave me alone, I’ll get things done.

I always do.

You seriously need to learn how to give some affection.

I could get a better hug from fencepost when I do get one from you.

Your “I love you”s have no feeling behind them.

How can I trust you when there’s virtually no affection?

At school, some of my friends run to me and give me hugs when they see me.

Some of them.

Their hugs feel good.

Yours don’t.

I can feel a difference believe it or not.

You say you like spending time with me.

Only when its convient for you I guess?

There are times I wish you were someone else.

Someone I might actually trust to tell things too.

You say to straighten up and do better in school.

I ask you for help in math, and you don’t even attempt to help me..

So here’s what I propose!

I start doing what I have to do in everything if you do what you need to do to straighten up too.

Meet me halfway.

If you don’t.

Its sad to say.

Things will fall apart.

I don’t want that.

I still love you.

I would fight for you.

I’ll fix my problems.

If you fix your problem.



Its just something I did in a few minutes. I ran it through spell check but I don't think I got everything right. Oh well.

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Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/01/2010 07:14PM by Jess.

i really like it. great job

nicely said jess

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Jess
Its just something I did in a few minutes. I ran it through spell check but I don't think I got everything right. Oh well.

It's really good.

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Thanks.

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wow...loved it. A little late in reading it, sorry, but Jess it's really good. It makes you think about a lot. Well done

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Ursula
wow...loved it. A little late in reading it, sorry, but Jess it's really good. It makes you think about a lot. Well done

Thanks

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That's very nice. I hope you don't mind me asking: Is the poem about someone real?

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Husitka
That's very nice. I hope you don't mind me asking: Is the poem about someone real?

Thanks.
Sure is.

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